Remember Calvin as Tracer Bullet?
That’s AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
Skewed, very skewed, but I agree with Yakety, AWESOME!
Better than those rewrites you see at the movie theaters…
“melted cheddar on a quarter pounder” now that is a “look”
More angles than Euclid’s notebook? Math geeks are smiling today.
“map and a calendar”. HA!
I’d like some more, please.
I thought it was a well written story. Rick should write a book.
Brilliant!
T. L.? Tina Louise… ☺
That was great! Can’t wait to see the rest of the story.
Yes dad is creative on his stories, thought Ruthie would recognize the main character.
Outstanding! Brilliant take on noir
I like the dad’s version much better.
Johnny Q Premium Member 7 months ago
Remember Calvin as Tracer Bullet?
Yakety Sax 7 months ago
That’s AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
bryce.gear 7 months ago
Skewed, very skewed, but I agree with Yakety, AWESOME!
jagedlo 7 months ago
Better than those rewrites you see at the movie theaters…
bobpickett1 7 months ago
“melted cheddar on a quarter pounder” now that is a “look”
WaitingMan 7 months ago
More angles than Euclid’s notebook? Math geeks are smiling today.
Meg: All Seriousness Aside 7 months ago
“map and a calendar”. HA!
Judeeye Premium Member 7 months ago
I’d like some more, please.
flemmingo 7 months ago
I thought it was a well written story. Rick should write a book.
gigagrouch 7 months ago
Brilliant!
ChessPirate 7 months ago
T. L.? Tina Louise… ☺
hitek1st 7 months ago
That was great! Can’t wait to see the rest of the story.
kab2rb 7 months ago
Yes dad is creative on his stories, thought Ruthie would recognize the main character.
Brent Rosenthal Premium Member 7 months ago
Outstanding! Brilliant take on noir
momofalex7 7 months ago
I like the dad’s version much better.