Many would say that is not a haiku. The goose flying south, Knows where it is going to, You are stuck in ice. Maybe that passes? It at least has a season reference. Fox kits bark at night, I do not know what they say, They don’t know either. Does talking about fox kits imply this is Spring?
Averagemoe over 1 year ago
This was originally from 2005. Which means Dana did it before Avatar.
tudza Premium Member over 1 year ago
Many would say that is not a haiku. The goose flying south, Knows where it is going to, You are stuck in ice. Maybe that passes? It at least has a season reference. Fox kits bark at night, I do not know what they say, They don’t know either. Does talking about fox kits imply this is Spring?
Ermine Notyours over 1 year ago
Constructing a verse.
Bad, corny puns I eschew.
Gesundheit! (Wipe, wipe.)
WaitingMan over 1 year ago
A little something I wrote many years ago:
My first haiku. Not
the best of efforts. I shall
try to do better.
Vet Premium Member over 1 year ago
Hard to write angst poetry when angst hasn’t hit you yet. For Ozy it is easy….dragon influences.