Jimbo, you should be glad you have them to judge your first draft.
I sometimes wish I could speak grackle. I’d love to know what that one guy was going on about when he launched into a ten-minute soliloquy from the orange tree I had parked under.
EVERYONE’s a critic! Let them try their hand at writing!
At least he’s thinking of Rose, so funny beginning or not, it’s a good move.
The squirrel better be careful…he’s going to fall off that fence if he’s not careful!
If I get Lost in your Eyes,
It is there I will remain,
Because I could never leave a place so perfectly Beautiful.
Those animals are just jealous because they haven’t anyone to write a poem for.
“My GPS keeps recalculating, the distance my love will go for thee.”
There you go Jimbo.
awgiedawgie Premium Member almost 5 years ago
Jimbo, you should be glad you have them to judge your first draft.
dadoctah almost 5 years ago
I sometimes wish I could speak grackle. I’d love to know what that one guy was going on about when he launched into a ten-minute soliloquy from the orange tree I had parked under.
Thorby almost 5 years ago
EVERYONE’s a critic! Let them try their hand at writing!
sandpiper almost 5 years ago
At least he’s thinking of Rose, so funny beginning or not, it’s a good move.
jagedlo almost 5 years ago
The squirrel better be careful…he’s going to fall off that fence if he’s not careful!
bakana almost 5 years ago
If I get Lost in your Eyes,
It is there I will remain,
Because I could never leave a place so perfectly Beautiful.
kathleenhicks62 almost 5 years ago
Those animals are just jealous because they haven’t anyone to write a poem for.
cwg almost 5 years ago
“My GPS keeps recalculating, the distance my love will go for thee.”
There you go Jimbo.