Hey Jon, this is dark, ambiguous, surreal and dream like. I re-read it a few times, a good sign. Sort of feels like some of the vibe I get reading some New Yorker cartoons. Way to go! (Charles Addams got his start cartooning in New Yorker, 1932-1970s)
Ida No over 7 years ago
There is no “I” in macrame. Look THAT up in your Funkin’ Wagnalls.
Chrystos B Minot Premium Member over 7 years ago
Hey Jon, this is dark, ambiguous, surreal and dream like. I re-read it a few times, a good sign. Sort of feels like some of the vibe I get reading some New Yorker cartoons. Way to go! (Charles Addams got his start cartooning in New Yorker, 1932-1970s)