Rip Haywire by Dan Thompson for April 07, 2012
April 06, 2012
April 09, 2012
Transcript:
Cobra: Well, madame poi is out of our hair for now... Rip: Are there any other people from your past I should know about, Cobra? Cobra: Well... hehe... I've been thinking about that, Rip - And you're right... the past should stay in the past. TNT: And a mai tai should stay in this glass. Can I get a little service here?
That was a fast story about a month long…the next one is a month long as well…I’m curious what the Haywire Hooligans prefer …short stories or the traditional 3 month stories…the reason I ask is I pay attention to this site and sometimes I feel like making the stories too long Can make readers bored or new readers wondering whats going on. (archives people!) and that short stories pacing is too fast.I also notice that If I put Cobra in a bikini…I mean story…readers like her a lot…so my question is based on your level of enjoyment reading Rip Haywire…what appeals to you most…thoughts, Hooligans? I’m interested and what you like and completely admit that I have no clue what I’m doing and have been winging it for the past 3 years. =)