I think Grandma would remember whether she’d ever been to Barcovia…
And whether her daughter(?)( …son?) had a baby girl, and abandoned her…(or died? Went to jail? Will we ever know?)
Also, um… the principal never seems to have to look up from his chair, towards the ceiling, when you’re standing in front of his desk.
Other than a few details like that, your story is almost somewhat perfectly plausible….
especially since you did use the word “fiction.”
I think Grandma would remember whether she’d ever been to Barcovia…
And whether her daughter(?)( …son?) had a baby girl, and abandoned her…(or died? Went to jail? Will we ever know?)
Also, um… the principal never seems to have to look up from his chair, towards the ceiling, when you’re standing in front of his desk.
Other than a few details like that, your story is almost somewhat perfectly plausible….
especially since you did use the word “fiction.”