Heart of the City by Steenz for November 11, 2010
November 10, 2010
November 12, 2010
Transcript:
There once was a beautiful maiden named Heart who lived in the wood... And it came to pass that a handsome prince married her and together they ruled the vast kingdom....By and by, Queen Heart became much loved by her people, as she had outlawed all stupid assignments given by the wicked English teacher... Mom: How's your creative writing homework coming? Heart: It was a very happy ending. how do you spell "banish"?
mnquiz over 13 years ago
Prince is not Dean???
rayannina over 13 years ago
He kinda looks like Dean … but with better hair.
hlagallah over 13 years ago
bit of advice - - remember your audience. Give this story to anyone but the English teacher.
TheDOCTOR over 13 years ago
The Prince isn’t DEAN?!!? Heart,HOW COULD YOU???
flintcrow over 13 years ago
Her narrative prose and composition is not too bad for a child. A little more length and good plot structure and she should get an ‘A’. Certainly better writing than Stephanie Meyer or John Grisham.
fritzoid Premium Member over 13 years ago
Heart in 10 years: “I want to go to the Prom with the quarterback, but if he doesn’t ask me there’s always Dean.”
Dean in 10 years: “What? The Prom is TONIGHT? Sure I’ll take you, Heart.”
Heart in 20 years: “I want to marry the rich and handsome movie star, but if he doesn’t ask me there’s always Dean.”
Dean in 20 years: “What? Our wedding is THIS weekend? Sure I’ll be there, Heart.”
Heart in 25 years: “Dean, I’m putting my foot down. We are NOT naming our baby ‘Zaphod!’”
Ed The Red Premium Member over 13 years ago
Heart’s dream prince looks disturbingly like Walter Mercado, the astrologer who used to be on Telemundo.
Decepticomic about 3 years ago
rerun