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1. 3 months ago on Betty

   Convoluted writing distracts from the message. I have read a variety of genres over the years, everything from youth novels to research papers. Often the more complex writing styles were accompanied by a reduced amount of information.

   Peer to peer highly technical research is excluded, but I don’t think that is what he is writing. If he is more focused on content, then he should consider it the rough draft. Polishing the final draft is when you focus on making sure the audience actually hears what you want to say.

   Otherwise, why bother trying to communicate?

2. 9 months ago on Betty

   It seems to me that he just presented her with an excellent opportunity to teach him how to make a cheeseburger, fries and a milkshake.

   If truly adventurous, she could also show him that if he starts a load of laundry, it should be ready to switch to the dryer when the dishes go back to the kitchen (to be properly washed or put in the dishwasher).

3. about 1 year ago on For Better or For Worse

   She might have met someone for studying? That would fit book, day, and difference in bus.

4. about 1 year ago on For Better or For Worse

   I believe this is a second run, with edits and updates. Rainy weather might have been consistent with 1st run, or it may just be commentary on attitudes to situations … or just having fun with April Showers.

5. about 1 year ago on Luann

   Someone suggested it was per box, but the box looks like it hols 18 jars? 9 per level, two levels.

   Looking at the jar size and the target market, they could probably have no problem with $20-25 a jar. But they need different packaging to appeal to most guys – enhancer or not.

6. about 1 year ago on Luann

   Both rolling eyes at “kiss of LOVE”, shared skepticism.

7. about 1 year ago on On A Claire Day

   She needs one of those plastic ball throwers. It picks up the ball (so she doesn’t get grossed out) and makes it easier to throw far.

8. about 1 year ago on Luann

   Some peoples’ social puberty lasts quite a bit longer than their physical one.

9. about 1 year ago on Luann

   The lines Luann might cross are different from the one’s Tara might. People with difficult backgrounds relate just fine in daily interactions, but it can be very difficult when somebody tries to pry into their background. Luann is very naive and has a very high chance of being oblivious to those lines.

10. about 1 year ago on Luann

    Luann’s attitude the flavor of “Ooooo, interesting! I must know more!” This is not an attitude geared towards wanting to listen with empathy and only as much support as would be accepted.