last panel -PHE: Wow I can ditch trouble forever.MAR: Uhh, your mom is calling you pretty loud.
p.s. Dana you’ve got to get over this fear of perfection. It’s making you pull your punches on the PHE character. Yesterday she was one breath from saying “Meh” to being inside The Void. Those who enter on their own volition do not escape easily. If PHE’s mother had any Mommy Radar whatsoever she would have started calling frantically for PHE when the child went into nothingness.
looks like a billard table
p.s. 1st thing that ran thru my head was Take a Walk on the Wild Side. – NOT UNICORN! that one is trolls run amok.
Dana, slipping again. It may as well be Dakota onboard Marigold. Condescention reaction undermines strip dynamic. Let Marygold join in singing a counterpoint of “Do ya, do ya, do ya love me baby, now that I’ve learned how to prance?” gets human mundane colliding with enchanted forrest without the hostility. Yesterday’s belly rub was great call.
p.s. greatest snark was Bugs. Even he got jailed when he went into the “King of the World” tirade.
Dana! what are you doing? You really need to change out Phoebe for Dakota if you are going to rise above the pack of snarky comic page kids trying to one up someone. Pheb suspicious, rude, and mean is a very weak character. She isn’t pretty, smart, or powerful enough. The snark needs an innocent character to play off of ala Abbot/Costello or it gets dull and flat. See Tatulli’s Heart vs Dean, Everyone in Sherman’s Lagoon vs Sherman. Danae vs her pony. Any might work with the debunked not so great unicorn character. You’re gonna have to spend a lot of time thinking of the meanest thing the character has to say to win in the final panel. Calvin finally imploded when Hobbs started attacking him as a physical enemy. Or if you prefer wonder and grace colliding w/childhood innocence see Dennis Menace – today = burping with soda vs adults entertaining. His statement is about wonder of soda not how stupid the adults are.
Actually it is call Capriole. It is part of a combination used to clear out pack hunters behind you that have caught you in an ambush. You don’t have to commit the front legs to push out a more powerful strike, thus exposing the throat to the wolves in front. It is followed by the Corbett, a rearing jump to clear out the forefront. And finish them off with a Piaffe stamping. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k7KDHhdY-ak has a Capriole near the end.
Only the Lipizzan or a few wild mustangs can do this combo.
Havanna help us
Movie has already been done its called9-5There used to be one on Utube called The Bosses Kidsequel was The Bosses Kid is Now the Boss