Luckily, the plan won’t cost an arm and a leg. Maybe just an arm. ;)
He seems a bit apprehensive to me.
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The cops are awfully close. Splitface had better scoot out of there and get his brilliant idea going quickly or this story is going to end fast!
I figure that the put the bomb inside Mike and Steve’s car, but the idea was to have one bomb explode both cars, in any case.
The conversation took a week to tell us, but in real life it would have only been a couple of minutes. Still, it seemed like a long time.
I think it’s going well overall. They just need to maintain that.
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It’s finally time to investigate the attack.
I don’t agree with buckman-j just above. I think this story is rather good so far, not perfect, but pretty good.
It doesn’t seem “choppy” to me, but I do agree that the strip waited too long to tell us that Splitface called them asking them to meet him there. We’ve been trying to figure out for a week how Splitface knew that his targets would be at the hotel.
Also, Tracy said, “I doubt that Splitface was seen inside the Siam, but we’ll check it out,” which seems like an odd thing to say if Splitface called the police offering to surrende.
At times, I’ve been justifiably accused of having way too much imagination here. It cuts both ways. (By the way, no coal for you from me!)