I read vol. 2 of your story and have some ideas regarding plot. I was thinking that the female was trying to find her brother who chased a mysterious doe into the woods. It turns out that the deer was of old age and had to pass down it’s powers to another creature, but the reader doesn’t find this out til later. The girl slowly discovers this as she see’s the light of him through the hazy fog out of her window. I think the inclination of the story should be rather slow so a new reader could get some idea as to what is happening, but when they look at the story as the whole it reveals something more beautiful.
~It’s just an idea :)
I am mostly interested in you art as I love inking and you carry the medium well.
Anyways, I apologize if I have created any plot wholes as I couldn’t find volume 1, so it would be great if you could send me a link to that. I can’t wait to see more, keep up the good work!
I read vol. 2 of your story and have some ideas regarding plot. I was thinking that the female was trying to find her brother who chased a mysterious doe into the woods. It turns out that the deer was of old age and had to pass down it’s powers to another creature, but the reader doesn’t find this out til later. The girl slowly discovers this as she see’s the light of him through the hazy fog out of her window. I think the inclination of the story should be rather slow so a new reader could get some idea as to what is happening, but when they look at the story as the whole it reveals something more beautiful.
~It’s just an idea :)
I am mostly interested in you art as I love inking and you carry the medium well.
Anyways, I apologize if I have created any plot wholes as I couldn’t find volume 1, so it would be great if you could send me a link to that. I can’t wait to see more, keep up the good work!