Good morning™ to all who are still alive!
The van seems to be spinning sideways on the steep mountain road (last frame) and that is never a good thing. Ghost, I wouldn’t be too sure just who might not live to tell about this!
I know that Avenger09 is going to complain that the trailer hitch disappeared and the license plate went blank in the last frame, but you really do have to add less detail in a wide shot. Personally, though, I would have put the trailer hitch in, since it is so salient to the story.
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