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5 months ago
Hey guys, I’ve got a lot going on right now. I’m Moving to a new state and starting a new job. So my story is on hold for now. It’s been fun, so hopefully I can resume writing again once I get settled.
I have a busy weekend planned so it may be a few days before I post again. Have a great day everyone.
Crispy’s Oop 2/27/15 Terror Of The T-RexPanel 1:It’s morning and the crew is waking up. They all immediately cover their noses and try not to gag. Ella says Ugh, what is that awful smell?"Panel 2:They all go to the cave opening. Everywhere they look there are huge piles of dinosaur poop. Ooola says “Do you think he’s gone?” Rick says “Yeah. After all that pooping, he probably had to go take a nap.”Panel 3:They go to the cliff edge and look down in the valley. There they see two rows of about 25 each of T-Rex’s standing in formation and Dr Evil is on a personal vehicle that looks similar to a segway, but it is hovering. He is moving back and forth in front of the Dinosaurs and yelling at them like an Army Sergeant. Ella says “What the? Are you guys seeing this?” Oop says “Yep. He’s training them.”
Crispy’s Oop 2/26/15 Terror Of The T-RexPanel 1:Dave Wowee appears in Doc Wonmugs lab. Doc’s excited. “Dave! It worked. Good to see you my friend.”Panel 2:It’s completely dark and quiet outside the cave now. Oop appears in the cave right next to Ooola. His sudden appearance scares Ella a little. She says. “Whoa, that takes some getting used to.” Ooola says " Alley! I’m so glad your’e back."Panel 3:Ooola tells Alley “Doc says the time machine is broken and we’re stuck here. What are we going to do?” Alley says “I don’t know, but it’s been a long day. Let’s get some sleep and we’ll come up with a plan in the morning.”Panel 4:Panel 4 shows the moon shining down on the valley. It’s peaceful and also eerie. There are Dinosaurs down there.
Cool. Thanks. Didn’t thomasx123 mention last week that he might start doing his own story? I would love to see it.
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Crispy’s Oop 2/25/15 Terror Of The T-RexPanel 1:Oop looks at Dave and says “If I can’t get to Wonmug, I have to find a way to get back to Ooola.” Dave says “There just might be a way. I think that maybe because you and I hit our remotes at the same time, they somehow communicated with each other and that’s how you ended up here. So here’s my plan. You send a hologram to Ooola telling her to use her remote in exactly one minute. Then you hit yours at the same time. I’ll try the same thing with Doc a few seconds later. Hopefully you will go to Ooola and I will go to Docs lab where I can help him fix the time machine.” Panel 2:Split Panel.Ooola and Doc are watching their respective holograms.Panel 3:Oop says “Here we go.”ZANG! He’s gonePanel 4:ZANG! Dave’s gone.
Crispy’s Oop 2/24/15 Terror Of The T-RexPanel 1:Oop appears right next to Dave Wowee surprising him. “Oop??? What are you doing Here? And what the heck are you wearing?” Oop says “I have no idea why I’m here. All I’m trying to do is get to Doc Wonmugs lab. First I get thrown into a hockey game and now I’m here. Help me get these skates off. They’re killing my feet.”Panel 2:Oop has removed all of his hockey gear. Dave says “Didn’t Wonmug tell you not to use your remote? The time machine is malfunctioning. That’s why you guys landed on the island a year later than planned.” He points down at the city. “Look at all those dinosaurs down there. We have to get out of here and I may have an idea.”Panel 3:They look down at the city. Dave says “I haven’t figured them out yet. See how the smaller ones with the lasers seem to be organized, almost marching in formation. They must be taking out helicopters or missiles when they fire their lasers off in the distance, because I haven’t seen one single incoming attack. And the tanks? They get taken out before they can even get close. Then there’s the larger T-Rex’s. No lasers. They just crash through the buildings and destroy everything in their paths. I’ve never seen anything like this.” Oop is very troubled by what he sees. “We have to find a way to stop this.”
Crispy’s Oop 2/23/15 Terror Of The T-RexPanel 1:After some on ice celebrating, Dinzler grabs Oop and says “Way to go Oopendike. I had my doubts about you at first, but that was incredible. We are going to party tonight.” Oop says “Sorry, I can’t make the party. I have somewhere else I need to be.”Panel 2:Dinzler says “Okay. I’ll make sure your name gets engraved on the Cup.” Alley says “Cool. Just try to get my name right. It’s Alley Oop.”Panel 3:Dinzler turns back toward the celebration and ZANG! Oop’s gone.Panel 4:Dave Wowee, still in 2153 has made his way to a safe place in the wooded hills, where he can watch the carnage happening down in the city. He has received Docs hologram warning him that his remote may not work properly, but he figures anywhere would be better than here. So he tries it. Nothing happens.
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