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   RanaRavens said, 5 months ago

   The Witch is creepy, but she’s not stupid.
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   Bailey said, 5 months ago

   “Love, selflessness, heroism, and — how you say? altruism.”
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   Would that all our kind spoke much — and frequently — of these things.
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   Excellent story, Kory. Brilliant stuff.
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   Sisyphos said, 5 months ago

   Nothing like a ruminating, introspective, scared Witchie-woman with a dangling eyeball….
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   crookedwolf said, 5 months ago

   I think Margo has proven she is not insignificant.
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   arsmall said, 5 months ago

   @Bailey

   ITA…brilliant Kory, simply brilliant.
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   arsmall said, 5 months ago

   @crookedwolf

   you speak truth sir crookedwolf.
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   Trickle Down said, 5 months ago

   Witch is a psychopath. She would do well on Wall Street with the other takers.
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   Josh said, 5 months ago

   The constant questioning of Margo’s true motivations by the takers is an interesting philosophical theme throughout this story. Kory, have you read “What is Man?” by Mark Twain?
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   Demonick said, 5 months ago

   The witch seems pretty chill about the state of her eyeball!
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    Bailey said, 5 months ago

    @Demonick

    … well she HAS had other things go “south” many years ago. Just sayin’…!
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    Habogee said, 5 months ago

    @RanaRavens

    “The Witch is creepy, but she’s not stupid.”
    The most interesting villains are usually very smart.
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    rmaxell said, 5 months ago

    This is the time Margo needs to be maintaining a safe distance from Baba Yaga.
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    Wabbit said, 5 months ago

    Sounds like Baba Yaga has had a thought she had never really considered before. Still, Margo does need to remain vigilant.
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    Bailey said, 5 months ago

    … another kudo, Kory. I SO love the text that so (very descriptively) let’s us all know who’s speaking.
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    Elderflower said, 5 months ago

    @Wabbit

    Baba Yaga puzzled and puzzed til her puzzler was sore…
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