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   Zyreenesque said, 7 months ago

   I would definitely clear more of the creepy forest away from the cabin, it’s a fire hazard too.
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   Dr. Oetker Pistazien said, 7 months ago

   Oh I can’t wait for Monday now!
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   waycyber said, 7 months ago

   Staff error for rafters, for rat serf err off star.
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   waycyber said, 7 months ago

   “Trust in me, just in me
   Shut your eyes and trust in me
   You can sleep safe and sound
   Knowing I am around

   Slip into silent slumber
   Sail on a silver mist
   Slowly and surely your senses
   Will cease to resist

   Trust in me, just in me
   Shut your eyes and trust in me"
   (Python Song, Jungle Book)

   Don’t go to sleep, boys, or another of you may vanish from sight and mind.
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   Three Steps Over Japan said, 7 months ago

   Chapter 1: Rufus & Biff
   Chapter 2: Cindy Fogel
   Chapter 3: The Mushpits
   Chapter 4: Margo
   Chapter 5: Twila
   Break: The Lost Side of Suburbia
   Chapter 6: The Stranger in the Dark
   Chapter 7: Goatsucker
   Chapter 8: The Taker in the Water
   Chapter 9: Bill
   Chapter 10: The Great Lakes
   Chapter 11: Jamie Jones and the Yellow Jacket
   Chapter 12: The Happy Land of Toys and Pleasure
   Chapter 13: The Red Hood and the Beast
   Chapter 14: Rafer Frost Comes Back
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   Three Steps Over Japan said, 7 months ago

   “They returned to the cabin. It was empty, except for a single Tickle Me Elmo doll lying in the middle of the floor.”
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   waycyber said, 7 months ago

   Rafrer Frost = Frank Oz!!!!!!!!

   “Hey, hey, hey! I’m gonna wipe you from existence wakka wakka wakka!”

   “Oh Rufey? Hey-yah!!!!”
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   waycyber said, 7 months ago

   My mistake, I know who Rafer Frost really is
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   Sisyphos said, 7 months ago

   A pleasant walk on a crisp autumn day, and back by dusk! —What could seem more ominous? I look forward to Monday with trepidation! [Or are we still getting weekend extras?]
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    waycyber said, 7 months ago

    I would like to see a character called Merlin Monroe – what a curious image that name conveys!
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    Barry44 said, 7 months ago

    @Sisyphos

    You want ominous? Look at the colors. Twilight precedes the dark. No more bright colors.
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    crookedwolf said, 7 months ago

    Guess it was an infected bite wound.
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    J2P2 said, 7 months ago

    @waycyber

    “As they entered, their benefactor removed his mask to reveal…Carroll Spinney!!!”
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    Three Steps Over Japan said, 7 months ago

    “You know how it goes in the song,
    ‘cause Rafer came back the very next day,
    we thought he was a long gone
    but he wouldn’t stay away.”
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    Yammo said, 7 months ago

    Whoa. Just the chapter title alone is quite a cliffhanger! I can’t stand such suspense, I think I’ll have to take a two-week break and return when I can read it without the feeling of needing to hide in the closet!
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