Lost Side of Suburbia by Kory Merritt

Lost Side of SuburbiaNo Zoom

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  1. aflhc1984

    aflhc1984 said, about 3 years ago

    Oh no… =(

  2. Sisyphos

    Sisyphos said, about 3 years ago

    Mixed feelings! Are these the last feelings Twila felt?

  3. olddog1

    olddog1 said, about 3 years ago

    Kid’s got guts. Feelings being controlled and changed.

  4. J2P2

    J2P2 said, about 3 years ago

    That is one scary-looking door.

    And

    Yipe. I feel a chill in my spine…

  5. togg

    togg said, about 3 years ago

    Go for it Twila! Open the door. Bash the Bogey!

  6. Tom Flapwell

    Tom Flapwell said, about 3 years ago

    Search your feelings. You know it to be true.

  7. J2P2

    J2P2 said, about 3 years ago

    @Tom Flapwell

    “Rufus, you have a sister.”

    Oh, right—that’s for tomorrow, too.

  8. bmonk

    bmonk said, about 3 years ago

    If she were more used to listening to her conscience, she might listen to that part that warns her of danger.

    ++++

    But, sadly, then how would the story progress?

    ++++

    To continue that line of reasoning, is it not all our fault that she’s in danger?

  9. Night-Gaunt49

    Night-Gaunt49 said, about 3 years ago

    Reminds me of what H.P.Lovecraft wrote of the “scientific zeal” overriding the natural caution to see something they would later think was not something they should have done. And goes Twila…

  10. tockde

    tockde said, about 3 years ago

    Don’t go toward the warm tingly feeling!

  11. zack-o-lantern

    zack-o-lantern said, almost 3 years ago

    whatever you do i say whatever you do, do not open the closet.

  12. zack-o-lantern

    zack-o-lantern said, almost 3 years ago

    come on twila they never go for the door!

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