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   Margueritem said, about 1 year ago

   It’s that evil ray in the background that has done this to you!

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   ejcapulet said, about 1 year ago

   Ooooh, that makes my eyes hurt!

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   Michle said, about 1 year ago

   There’s always Dr.Phil or Oprah.

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   plight said, about 1 year ago

   top half is walking along roughly
   above bottom half, despite
   gasping hole in chest area

   wound goes in and down, down
   falling or stalking the onrush of
   air through dismembered memories

   any part of me bites itself gruffly
   in vain; more holes, more light!
   but mantra waxes, warier

   lost is not malfunction of found
   so much as the chivvying of blushes
   attuned to pulse that wearies

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   Ray C said, about 1 year ago

   margueritem says:
   It’s that evil ray in the background that has done this to you!
   It wasn’t me! :-0

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   Margueritem said, about 1 year ago

   Ray C says:

   margueritem says:
   It’s that evil ray in the background that has done this to you!
   It wasn’t me! :-0

   LOL!

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   Ray C said, about 1 year ago

   Speculating…
   This is a very sad poem. The pattern in the background looks very much like one of those plastic magnifying strips that you can hold up to fine print so you can read it…but you have to get it just exactly the right distance to focus.
   The center of the image seems to be writing that’s almost but not quite in focus. She wants to read the answer to what is wrong, but can’t get it into focus.
   On the other hand, she seems to be outside, walking somewhere against the wind. So, a completely different take.

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   frogapplause said, about 1 year ago

   http://tinyurl.com/ysdsrx

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   Ray C said, about 1 year ago

   frogapplause says:
   http://tinyurl.com/ysdsrx
   Thanks, Teresa.

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    ruffianspamson said, about 1 year ago

    Hey Teresa, you OK? This is Nel, the Very Strange Geosciences Instructor in the Deep South. Today’s entry makes me sad - my T-shirt from that place is getting raggedy from long use. I do hope that isn’t where you are now; but if you are, may you pop out into the sunshine soon.

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    tobybartels said, about 1 year ago

    
    

    http://tinyurl.com/ysdsrx

    
    

    I've been there. Good luck.

12. 

    Dypak said, about 1 year ago

    Poignent. And Plights poem is moving as well. Thanks for sharing.

13. 

    WickedCrazy said, about 1 year ago

    Welcome to my friggen world.