Endtown by Aaron Neathery

Endtown

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  1. Furlips

    Furlips said, over 1 year ago

    “Senator. You’ve done enough. Have you no sense of decency, sir? At long last, have you left no sense of decency?”

    Joseph N. Welch.

  2. Greg Trail _ I'm a Dillo!

    Greg Trail _ I'm a Dillo! said, over 1 year ago

    Starting to pull it all together…
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    Hmmm… anyway, wow this is going to be rough. Eventually, I think Walt and Wally are both going to have roles in restoring order, and possibly the rat commander.
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    In the meantime, I’m very worried for Algood and especially Linda…

  3. MacEwanMouse

    MacEwanMouse said, over 1 year ago

    Now I’m convinced Allgood is a dead man unless a third party steps in. He knows way to much, and his sacrifice will be a symbol of Jacob slaying a great evil.

  4. dirtyoldlady1

    dirtyoldlady1 said, over 1 year ago

    Woow..is has been a lot since I have been this early. What profound comments should I spout.
    Why didn’t he expose Linda? Now that is what we are wondering about and have been wondering for many, many WEEKS. So now we wait again. The weeks go so fast and the week ends drag on and on. Sigh. Miss you then Aaron.
    Blessed Be.

  5. Greg Trail _ I'm a Dillo!

    Greg Trail _ I'm a Dillo! said, over 1 year ago

    Hmm…. if Jacob really had so many “trusted devotees”, then that means there are a lot more people down in Endtown who know at least a little more about what’s going on than we previously thought. The more people involved, the more danger for Jacob- perhaps there’s a slight chance one of them knows too much, and is going to spill?

  6. MacEwanMouse

    MacEwanMouse said, over 1 year ago

    @Greg Trail _ I'm a Dillo!

    I really hope for the Rat commander to become head honcho in all of this, let them play by their own ideas. It seems like those in leadership roles are always working against each other, if it was all rat, at least they could have comfort that they’re one kin and clan.

  7. Greg Trail _ I'm a Dillo!

    Greg Trail _ I'm a Dillo! said, over 1 year ago

    @MacEwanMouse
    Yeah, I really like the rats… :)

  8. Level_Head

    Level_Head said, over 1 year ago

    @Furlips

    [redacted]

    For Jacob is quite serious, enjoying pulling strings
    And monologuing, guilty of no doubt some other things
    How well-drilled are his “troops” in what’s supposed to happen now?
    And I don’t think that Maude is his — or Holly’d have a cow

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  9. LordGrey

    LordGrey said, over 1 year ago

    I Guess Allgood is a turned Topsider himself. Exposing that Ex-Topsiders dwell within Endtown may result in a Witch hunt for Ex-Topsider that would expose him too.

  10. Nabuquduriuzhur

    Nabuquduriuzhur said, over 1 year ago

    I wonder if Velda will wait to blast both Jacob and Octavius, or pull her gun and gloat like Hollywood loves, or simply pull her gun and shoot both of them. Or will she let Jacob finish his ego trip and shoot him?

  11. Three Steps Over Japan

    Three Steps Over Japan said, over 1 year ago

    Well, I was wrong on one count. Allgood has shame.
    I thought he hadn’t exposed Linda only because someone else was stopping him from it. This does mean, though, that Jake was throwing Linda to the wolves. Given that he hates Topsiders as much as he seems to resent unmutated humans, he probably still considers Linda as expendable.

    It’d be hard to see Maude as originally being part of Jake’s plan, since he couldn’t have second guessed that Linda would ask her for milk for the cake. Unless… If Jake was able to dictate where Linda was going to stay when she got out of indoctrination… The fact that she was in a room with blackmarket tootsie rolls… And the staged appearance of “Mr. Hopper” asking for cake… Then maybe having a landlord that produces milk was an additional part of the sting… But Linda started at the cafe at Holly’s insistence, and that’s only because Doc. Chase asked her to. Ok, yeah, this all goes back to everything being one big prank on Allgood. April Fool!

  12. Three Steps Over Japan

    Three Steps Over Japan said, over 1 year ago

    @LordGrey

    “Exposing that Ex-Topsiders dwell within Endtown may result in a Witch hunt for Ex-Topsider that would expose him too.”

    It’s already an open secret that ex-Topsiders live in Endtown. ex-Topsiders need HC approval to get into the colony, and there have been roughly 700 people to serve on the HC since The End. Anyone that was HC when a Topsider came through would know about it and could tell their friends or family afterward.

  13. LordGrey

    LordGrey said, over 1 year ago

    @TSOJ
    And where IS this HC you talking of?

  14. MacEwanMouse

    MacEwanMouse said, over 1 year ago

    @LordGrey

    The HC wasn’t ALWAYS infiltrated and controlled. There were many chances before this occurrence for the word to get out. The fact that Al was on the council helps show just how recent this turn of events is.

  15. Selina Eubanks

    Selina Eubanks said, over 1 year ago

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