Endtown by Aaron Neathery

Endtown

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  1. BikeNBoatN

    BikeNBoatN said, 7 months ago

    Wow. Deep!

  2. Dr. Oetker Pistazien

    Dr. Oetker Pistazien said, 7 months ago

    Whoa, I got the shivers while reading this! Good Stuff!

  3. Nabuquduriuzhur

    Nabuquduriuzhur said, 7 months ago

    So, now you are a shiny softball…
    .
    I would guess her second chance at life is redemption. Should be interesting to see what her personality is like.
    .
    Too bad people don’t get second chances at life (in the literal sense.)

  4. dirtyoldlady1

    dirtyoldlady1 said, 7 months ago

    Rather God like advice. Instead of two fingers touching in space we have a firm hug and kiss, Will she be able to fit in with the law and order stuff?// I don’t think so. Has anyone ever mentioned “church”?
    Blessed Be

  5. C. Brown

    C. Brown said, 7 months ago

    Not the direction I expected. Always worth the wait!

  6. Level_Head

    Level_Head said, 7 months ago

    Flask was so far depressed
    She’d have ended it all
    Marx is not even stressed
    He is having a ball

    But while Flask’s still here, maybe
    What do we look upon?
    She’s a ditto-ball? Baby?
    And how long’s “from now on”?

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  7. Three Steps Over Japan

    Three Steps Over Japan said, 7 months ago

    Is it dittos, or is it Memorex?

  8. Bob Guthrie

    Bob Guthrie said, 7 months ago

    Okay, he is not letting her go through the other side, giving her a second chance, but?,…

  9. dbig 1oohh

    dbig 1oohh said, 7 months ago

    @Nabuquduriuzhur

    I gotta tell you how wrong you are on that. When I was 2 years old an idiot hit my Moms Station Wagon which didn’t hurt her much but smacked my head to the door. I had a severe concussion and could have died,but didn’t. So I got a second chance in life. Then on July 3,1988, I had just come back from my 2 Year European Tour for the U.S.A.F. and another idiot hit the back tire of my Harley because he was too drunk to see me. That cracked my occipital and put me in a semi-coma for 5 weeks. I have no memory of Parkland Hospital or the Medi-flight to Wilford Hall U.S.A.F. Medical Center,San Antonio. I STILL didn’t die so that’s my 3rd chance in life. Don’t say people don’t get a second chance when I’m PROOF that it can happen.

  10. Logan Sackett

    Logan Sackett said, 7 months ago

    The Marx character is too godlike for me. I can’t wait till we get back to some “real” people.

  11. Coyoty

    Coyoty said, 7 months ago

    She’s apparently also a ditto pokeball now, too. Is that temporary until she’s made physical again, or will she now be a ditto hologram? Is she active, or just stored in memory indefinitely? Being yourself in suspended animation isn’t much good.

  12. perceptor3

    perceptor3 said, 7 months ago

    Marx ain’t God. But we’re all made in His image… and He often speaks through other people, if we are wise enough to listen. While I’ve never tried to get all genocidal on a Topsider outpost, I have my past, and am on my sixtieth or seventyith chance by now. Nice one, Aaron. May we all make the best of the roles we are given…

  13. crookedwolf

    crookedwolf said, 7 months ago

    He’s got the whole, world, in his hands…

  14. Manuel Lim

    Manuel Lim said, 7 months ago

    Is he holding Flask or is he just holding a ball?

  15. Three Steps Over Japan

    Three Steps Over Japan said, 7 months ago

    @Manuel Lim

    “Is he holding Flask or is he just holding a ball?”

    That’s not really important now. It’s the thought that counts.

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