Alley Oop by Jack and Carole Bender

Alley Oop

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  1. Night-Gaunt49

    Night-Gaunt49 said, 11 months ago

    Yes let us return to Doctor Wonmug and see about getting funding by the military and corporations to go back to Earth 2- aka Ytopia.

  2. Night-Gaunt49

    Night-Gaunt49 said, 11 months ago

    Alternate Alley Oop Chapter 14 “Dark Trail of Doom”(10) 6/21/12


    Panel One


    “you wouldn’t believe me if I told you.” Alley said. “We will!” said all of them of the inner circle, the troopers in the security team had no idea. Then Chet intervenes to let Alley get a break and then debriefing as they continue on course to Thailand. “Where did you get that gold necklace and club?” Chet asked him. “Oh this is really a communicator, and the club came from Tor, a person from near my time.” He hoisted it up, made of a heavy black wood like copobolo in texture and density only with a diamond scaled patterned bark on the grip. Only someone with great upper body strength can use it well, and it fits Alley like a glove.


    Panel Two


    As I was saying before, the stories of “living-dead men and creatures immune to bullets have been coming in from all over now” in the area and the robberies of technical data was enough to red flag this op. for the next expected target.


    Panel Three


    We should be there in 3 hours so we should get some sleep until then. And that was it for the mission briefing till they are ready to load out.


  3. squirrelchaser

    squirrelchaser said, 11 months ago

    Three panels – Bonus!

  4. Bob Carver

    Bob Carver said, 11 months ago

    Now we’re finally moving the story along. The Benders may be running about ten weeks ahead of us and finally read the comments about the snails’ pace of the story.

  5. larryh77

    larryh77 said, 11 months ago

    Just like a woman, always giving orders to the man to do something. Why don’t you “get on it” Ooola!

  6. FENRISULFR

    FENRISULFR said, 11 months ago

    @Night-Gaunt49

    Both yours, and Larry’s stories feel like they’re starting to find their own pace. That is, they’re no more just the outgrowth the wish to show the Benders how a good Alley Oop story should be done. It’s sole purpose is no longer just to prove a point [which to many of us has long been proven] but now the tale is being told simply because you want it to be told. I’m glad I’ve had the opportunity to see both yours, and Larry’s takes.

  7. prasrinivara

    prasrinivara said, 11 months ago

    I think Alley’s missed Ooola’s sarkiness.

  8. davidf42

    davidf42 said, 11 months ago

    That’s it? Alley lets his friend ride off into the sunset with a homicidal nut who threatened to murder their king? He doesn’t even offer to travel with them? Ooola just lets her friend go? And all of this on a tame TTops that nobody has an explanation for? This is the end of a story arc? We waited how many months for this?

  9. Night-Gaunt49

    Night-Gaunt49 said, 11 months ago

    @davidf42

    Expect FENRISULFR to eventual cover that part of the Bender ’s brain storming

  10. marvee

    marvee said, 11 months ago

    Is Ooola still jealous and giving Alley a cold shoulder?

  11. nottawasaga

    nottawasaga said, 11 months ago

    It’s hard to imagine that Lola is being basically ignored in her quest to return to E2, and husband…and it is no surprise that Oola is sticking it to Alley to “get on it.. NOW”… I think a lot of us guys would do nothing if we didn’t have a spouse to nag us into action.

  12. WW2 Marine Veteran

    WW2 Marine Veteran said, 11 months ago

    @nottawasaga

    By golly, I do believe you are correct!

  13. billdi

    billdi said, 11 months ago

    @davidf42

    well said — this was my thought exactly: that’s it? really? an ultra-lame ending to a dumb story arc, but that’s what the 2012 oop as “crafted” by the benders gives us.

  14. r0sc0e

    r0sc0e said, 11 months ago

    Now Alley is a wuss! Thank you Benders! What will you do to him next, make him wear a dress and dance?

  15. Wiselad

    Wiselad said, 11 months ago

    @r0sc0e

    don’t give them silly ideas, they might go with it

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