Adventures of Mike & Simon by J. Lawrence & B. Alexander

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  1.  You smell like a walrus

    You smell like a walrus said, about 1 month ago

    I don’t click on most comics because of and icon, but I did for this because the art looked nice.

    It seems you guys draw out everything before considering text layout, often the dialogue placement appears to be ‘where ever it fits’, overlaping with drawings a lot too. You guys should adjust you’re compostions and boxes to account for the dialogue.

    There feels like a lot of white space. You guys don’t neccesarily need to do shadows if you can’t – it’s better to stick with things you do well then to add poor attempts, but thickening/ varying the lines, outlines, pencil/pen strokes would make the art look more finished/ pop out. A lot of the art looks like rough sketches mixed with clean sketches.

  2. Plods with Beer ( did I mention beer? )

    Plods with Beer ( did I mention beer? ) GoComics PRO Member said, about 1 month ago

    So far so good. I’m finally getting into the toon. Hope this continues.

  3. Tony Wyatt

    Tony Wyatt GoComics PRO Member said, 20 days ago

    Love the story and the pace it’s going now, keep up the good work

  4. MikeSimon

    MikeSimon GoComics PRO Member said, 5 days ago

    Hey Everybody,
    Check out the blog at mikeandsimon.wordpress.com.

    It is updated every Sunday afternoon

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